Well written but a tad wordy, in my opinion. If your daughter’s friend respects your opinion, she’ll likely made it through. But that would depend on her age, too, and her experience with personal electronics. Much of the youth these days have a short attention span.
Yes it is a bit wordy - I was trying to go for "elder statesman" haha. Seriously, though, it's hard to know how to approach things. I mean, people don't usually respond too well when you come right out and say "Everything you've been told over the last 20 months, everything you've believed, is a load of bollocks"
"Alice" is pretty level-headed and clever - and definitely has the attention span of more than a few goldfish.
What about infertility? Vaxx shedding? There is enough rumblings out there to stop and look before crossing the street, although we may never know because these things are considered crazy fringe. And the fact we don't know what will happen 5 or 20 years down the road? I thought it was a lovely letter, and very balanced, without going into these details. Well done sir.
Well written but a tad wordy, in my opinion. If your daughter’s friend respects your opinion, she’ll likely made it through. But that would depend on her age, too, and her experience with personal electronics. Much of the youth these days have a short attention span.
Yes it is a bit wordy - I was trying to go for "elder statesman" haha. Seriously, though, it's hard to know how to approach things. I mean, people don't usually respond too well when you come right out and say "Everything you've been told over the last 20 months, everything you've believed, is a load of bollocks"
"Alice" is pretty level-headed and clever - and definitely has the attention span of more than a few goldfish.
What about infertility? Vaxx shedding? There is enough rumblings out there to stop and look before crossing the street, although we may never know because these things are considered crazy fringe. And the fact we don't know what will happen 5 or 20 years down the road? I thought it was a lovely letter, and very balanced, without going into these details. Well done sir.